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Старый 27.09.2009, 19:57   #107
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DON’T GO AWAY
(Tim Norell – Björn Håkanson)
From “YE SI CA” (1981)


Don’t say goodbye
Don’t say goodbye
Don’t make me cry out
I need you when day is done

Don’t say goodbye
Don’t say goodbye
Don’t make me cry out
I need you I need you now

Hide my tears in the rain
Pretending it will soften the pain
Single girl is that your game?
I love you

In missing heart you hear that song
Once it burned your blood and turned you on
Radio inside my car
Sings I love you
I love you

Don’t say goodbye
Don’t say goodbye
Don’t make me cry out
I need you when day is done

Don’t say goodbye
Don’t say goodbye
Don’t make me cry out
I need you I need you now

The lonely {parts / voice} of my night
{Stays / It’s just} before the morning light
Reaching over of my {right / ride}
I love you

Don’t you think a fool {can cry / get pride}
{Heartbeat is wrong} and {I} wonder how
He’s going to survive
Knowing he loves you
He loves you


Текст существовал только в черновике. Первый куплет я поправил и, думаю, там получилось более менее правильно. Во втором же куплете очень много неразборчивых мест (выделены красным). В строке {Heartbeat is wrong} and {I} wonder how (во второй её части) I обязательно должно быть по смыслу, но я его там улавливаю с большим трудом.


STAY HERE THE NIGHT
(Tim Norell – Björn Håkanson)
From “YE SI CA” (1981)


Stay here the night
I don't wanna be alone
Say it's alright
That you don't have to go on home

Baby listen you know I care
You light a fire when you are here
Let me forget all my pain
Tell me that you will remain

Everybody that I know
Has gone to some midnight show
You and I are on our own
There's no need for you to go on home

Stay here the night
I don't wanna be alone
Say it's alright
That you don't have to go on home

Don't say you’ll leave and walk away
Tell me you care oh I want you stay
Stay here the night
I don't wanna be alone

Let's light the candles, open the wine
Let us sit down and just feel fine
Baby I can understand
Why we can find a promised land

Say it's alright
That you don't have to go tonight


Здесь всё совпало с официальным текстом, за исключением одного уточнения:

Don't say you leave and walk away ->
Don't say you’ll leave and walk away
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