АВТОР, спасибо за замечания, с ними полностью согласен.
FLASHBACK
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From “Jo-Anne Jo-Anne” single (b-side) (1983)
The wind seems so silent tonight on the {time / town}
Spoiling the taste of my wine
Spinning and drifting round and around
Searching the girl of my mind
(And now it {all despairs / only spends} to reason
Dreaming once again)
I should be looking in your eyes
Lovin' you {back when}
Just like a flashback to your heart
Right into your heart, yeah-yeah
Oh, I send a flashback to your heart
Right into your heart, oh yeah
The morning will ease {all} the pain that I feel
Dreaming the dream {long ago}
Watchin' you sleeping, my heart in my hand
Trying to find me a home
(And when the silent wind is changing
Leaving you alone)
And time is slipping through my fingers
I’m falling like a stone
Just like a flashback to your heart
Right into your heart, yeah-yeah
Oh, I send a flashback to your heart
Right into your heart, oh
Gimme feeling now
Come on and place me to your heart
Like a flashback to your heart, woah yeah
Примечания. Черновой текст был взят с форума, и некоторые моменты в нём уточнены. Хотя неясностей тоже пока хватает.
The wind seems so silent tonight on the {time / town}
(Я когда-то высказался в пользу варианта town, но тогда непонятно, почему on, а не in. В общем, это место под вопросом.)
Spinning and drifting around and around ->
Spinning and drifting round and around
(Вроде бы есть такое выражение.)
And no it all just past the reason dreaming what's a day ->
And now it {all despairs / only spends} to reason dreaming once again
(Одно из самых неразборчивых мест в этой песне.)
I keep be looking in your eyes ->
I should be looking in your eyes
Lovin' you {back when}
(Очень сомневаюсь, что два последних слова здесь именно такие.)
The morning will lethal the pain that I feel ->
The morning will ease {all} the pain that I feel
Dreaming the dream on the gold ->
Dreaming the dream {long ago}
And wind is siling, when this taking ->
And when the silent wind is changing
And time is sleeping to my fingers ->
And time is slipping through my fingers
And fall like a stone ->
I’m falling like a stone
JUPITER SIGN
(Tim Norell - Björn Håkanson)
From “JUPITER SIGN” (1984)
Coffee bar closed by old maid
Only {words / verse / worse} {try / tryin'} to {get / catch} your attention
Spinnin’ in your {lonesome night} -
Jupiter sign
Holding up {to / the} {well news / aliens} chart
Capricorns are said to bring on adventure
{Body’s at heaven design / Bodies are haven't decide}
Jupiter sign
(Marry will be there)
This night is a Scorpio night
(Waiting for you)
Mysterious but maybe just right
Your astrologer will tell you what is laying in store
She's hiding all the answers for tomorrow
Your astrologer can tell you exactly the score
She can navigate in waters
{There at brown cello}
Stepping out in the lane
A lady in yellow is asking a question
”Will you be back here at nine?”
Jupiter sign
Destiny is {trapped} in her eyes
Reach out your hands {and / so} {that she / magic} can guide you
Molding {up} fate from {being mind}
Jupiter sign
Holding up {to / the} {well news / aliens} chart
Capricorns are said to bring on adventure
{Body’s at heaven design / Bodies are haven't decide}
Jupiter sign
Jupiter sign
Jupiter sign
My Jupiter sign
(Marry is dancing)
This night is a Scorpio night
(Dancing alone)
Mysterious but maybe just right
Your astrologer will tell you what is laying in store
She's hiding all the answers for tomorrow
Your astrologer can tell you exactly the score
She can navigate in waters
{There at brown cello}
Jupiter sign
Stepping out in the lane
A lady in yellow is asking a question
”Will you be back here at nine?”
Jupiter sign
Your astrologer will tell you what is laying in store
She's hiding all the answers for tomorrow
Your astrologer can tell you exactly the score
She can navigate in water
{There at brown cello}
My Jupiter sign
Standing in lane (oh-oh-oh)
Waiting for the answer oh (oh-oh-oh)
My jupiter sign
Jupiter sign
Тексты взяты с форума и из обменника и совмещены. Как мне показалось, это одна из самых сложных для понимания текста песен; во всяком случае, мне она практически не поддалась. Очень многие моменты тут остаются спорными или даже откровенно неверными. Тут даже нет особого смысла перечислять их ещё раз: всё, что выделено красным (как минимум), нуждается в доработке. Приведу только пару мест:
This knot is a Scorpio night ->
This night is a Scorpio night
Тот случай, когда самый простой вариант может быть самым правильным.
{There at brown cello}
Совершенно неподдающаяся анализу строка, несмотря на то, что повторяется три раза. У меня есть предположение, что в начале может быть That, а в конце - yellow...
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